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Revision Day 1- AI Feedback + Response

2/24/2025

 
DUE DATES- ON TIME​​​​​​​​​​
  1. AI Revision Plan. DUE: Tuesday 2/25,  Start of Class. Google Classroom.
  2. Thesis FINAL Draft. DUE: Sunday 3/9, MIDNIGHT. Google Classroom.

DUE DATES- LATE (-10%)​​
  1. Thesis Rough Draft. LAST DAY TO TURN IN: Sunday 3/2, MIDNIGHT. Google Classroom.

Announcements:
  1. Share your draft with your Senior Project Advisor! Do it now, now, now!
  2. Wednesday- Off campus this week, but NOT next week. 

Rubric Analysis
  1. Read through the rubric that we will use to grade your senior thesis. 
  2. For each bullet point: circle if you are confident in this as it stands right now, star if it needs revision but you are confident in your ability to do it, square if you know it needs improvement but you’re not sure how to do this.
  3. Review Thesis Revision handout, explain structure of the next few weeks, review schedule
  4. Set expectation- you will be engaging in critique EVERY DAY. You will probably also have to spend time outside of class to refine this.  I want this to be the BEST THING you have ever written. This takes time, energy, and focus!

AI Feedback
You have been given TWO forms of AI feedback on your rough draft. 
  1. Type 1- Specific comments on your draft. These are connected to specific rubric categories. If you see a comment about a specific thing, assume that is an issue elsewhere as well. So if, for example, it leaves a comment about a topic sentence, take that as a tip to look at ALL your topic sentences and apply that feedback.
  2. Type 2- Holistic feedback that identifies strengths (Glow), weaknesses (Grow), and questions to guide your revisions (Wonder). 

See the AI revision assignment on Google Classroom- the big sweeps of today are that you should get a sense of what needs to be revised, develop a prioritized revision plan, and start revising.

Work Time
  1. Complete the AI Revision Plan assignment
  2. Get a meeting scheduled with your Senior Project Advisor. Sooner is BETTER!

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