Storytelling With Data- Critiques + FINISH IT

DUE DATES- ON TIME​​​​​​​

1. Transition Assessment. DUE: Thursday, 11/7, End of Class. Google Classroom.
2. Storytelling With Data FINAL DRAFT Combined Essay. DUE: Friday, 11/11, Midnight.

 
DUE DATES- LATE (-10%)​​

1. Storytelling With Data Outline. LAST DAY TO TURN IN: Friday 11/8, Start of Class. Google Classroom.

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Starter 23
Go into the shared document.  Read the individual essay that is AFTER yours (so if yours is the last one, you will read the first one).  Leave at least 3 comments on that essay.

1. One comment should be a positive comment “I liked this ___________ because _____________”
2. Two comments should be specific revision “You should revise __________ because ___________. To do this, you should (insert specific and helpful suggestion here).”
3. Then, in your starter document, list your top 3 work priorities for today.  BE SPECIFIC.

Work Time!

1. Make sure ALL individual drafts are in the shared document, and complete.
2. DO YOUR TRANSITION ASSESSMENT
3. Do transitions between ALL paragraphs and sections
4. Get everyone’s citations in a Works Cited section and alphabetized
5. Write collaborative intro and conclusion (we will workshop these tomorrow, and need drafts done by the start of class tomorrow)
6. Proofread, revise, make them more polished
7. Done? Come check in with Lori. ​