Weds- College Essays Day 5

DUE DATES- ON TIME​

1. College Essay FINAL + Cover Sheet. DUE: Monday, 9/12, Start of Class

DUE DATES- LATE (-10%)​

1. Seminar Reflection. LAST DAY TO TURN IN: Friday, 9/9, Start of Class

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Step 1: Prepare for the peer critique

1. What is one thing you really like about your essay/topic?
2. What is one thing you do not like or would like to change?
3. What is a question you need help with from your group?

EXAMPLES: Does my word choice and tone show my personality?  How could my hook grab your attention better?  How can I end my essay in a less obvious way? Do you understand the moral of my story clearly? How could that be clearer or stronger?  Where could I add more depth and detail? 

Step 3: Essay Tuning Protocol

1. Follow the protocol
2. Actively participate
   
3. Remember, feedback should be helpful, specific and kind.
   

End of Class: Review how to turn this in!
Review assignment on Google Classroom and turn in instructions